During my school experience in Clyde Quay School, i had the privilage of observing a peotry writing lesson.
The exercise: Finish a peom starting with "as the moon wakes".
I decided to write one too...
tell me wad u think!
=)
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As the moon wakes, all is silhouette
The lady is red appears in my head
I cant see her face but know does my heart
her beauty and grace is beyond disgrace
Oh do I long for beauty and grace
Oh how I desire to adore her face
Yet glimpses i get as short as a breath
of beauty and grace beyond disgrace
Her shiny hair flows like the oceans
Her glowing skin excites like a flame
You beckon for me yet meet we cannot
For all is silhouette, the girl of my dreams...
